whoa… keep going! David, this is cool! Why don’t you draft the “book jacket” copy to give us a bird’s eye view of the what and why of this story. I’d love to read that too. 🔥🔥
I'm hooked! Jeffrey's body ... Emma's view of the marriage ... the sharp conflict ... your subheads/chapter headings that lead us gently forward ... This feels expertly done, David. I am already rooting for Emma to make a clean break from Jeffrey, but maybe you'll keep this going and show me there's an alternative. Hmm. Curious, curious.
🌹🌻🌸💐💚💜❤️🌼😍🥰
A garden of emojis.
So… what happens next?
Good question!
I would love to read more, if you want to share more. And if it’s a short story, thank you for sharing it!
Sneak peak of a novel you’re working on? Love it!
I'd love to read more!
I don't recall you writing fiction previously. This was great. Thanks David.
Nice. What a curious departure!
So far, so good
One whale of an imagination! Thinking of what you will write as prequel and sequel and make it into a NYC/Miami novel.
Amazing! When did you start writing “fiction”?
It's been a draw for me off and on.
whoa… keep going! David, this is cool! Why don’t you draft the “book jacket” copy to give us a bird’s eye view of the what and why of this story. I’d love to read that too. 🔥🔥
And sharing with a few friends.
I'm hooked! Jeffrey's body ... Emma's view of the marriage ... the sharp conflict ... your subheads/chapter headings that lead us gently forward ... This feels expertly done, David. I am already rooting for Emma to make a clean break from Jeffrey, but maybe you'll keep this going and show me there's an alternative. Hmm. Curious, curious.
I didn’t expect fiction when I pried my eyes open this morning! Well done; I could happily have kept reading.
Love the Billy Joel clip! That story makes sense at last of the song. 😂 Thank you.
I need the next chapter!
This is GREAT!